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Chapter Four, Update Three

Friday, October 16th, 2009

…a few weeks pass…

 

Paolo had not posted a lookout on the mast, so a man in the bow saw it first—

 

“Land! Siracusa harbor ahead!”

 

An hour of easy rowing brought the Sant’Agata to the quay. Buono and the other rowers wheeled her slowly in place until she pointed her stern to the dock. They tied up and dropped a pair of anchors from the bow. Buono got up with the rest of the rowers and stretched out his legs. Devin passed him a skin of wine.

 

“You’ll like Siracusa, you will,” Devin said. “A fine town. How’s your Greek?”

 

“I re—” Buono caught himself. He’d almost said, ‘I read Greek better than I speak it.’

 

“My Greek’s all right, I suppose,” he said instead.

 

“Good!” Devin winked and grinned. “You can do the talking, then. I know just where to go.”

 

“Where are we going?” Buono asked.

 

Devin glanced skyward as though praying. “Where’d this one come from? A monestary? To get laid, Buono! To get laid!”

 

“Oh!”

 

“Starboard-quarter section!” Achilles called.

 

“Ah, good!” Devin said, “We get our shore-leave first—we’ll have our pick of the ladies before they’re all tired out. Come on!” He dragged Buono astern by his elbow.

 

They passed Achilles on the gangplank ramp, who put a few bronze coins into each man’s hand.

 

“That’s all?” Devin scoffed. “For rowing your big black arse all the way to Sicily?”

 

Achilles laughed from his belly. His open-hand slap to Devin’s ear knocked the grin from the Celt’s face. “The Captain wants you back in two hours. You get paid off when the voyage is over, in Venice. Now get off!” He shoved Devin down the ramp, and Buono followed.

 

“All right,” Devin said, counting the coins, “we’ve enough to get drunk or get laid, but not both. What’s your vote?”

 

“Drunk,” Buono answered without hesitation.

 

“Excellent choice,” Devin said. “Considering the girl you could get with this much bronze, you’d need to be drunk first anyway.”

 

“Hi! Wait for me!” Elihu jogged after them on the quay, holding up the skirts of his black robe in both hands. “Where are you going?”

 

“To the book-sellers, of course, and after that a nice hot shave and a stroll in the all-buggering gardens,” Devin said.

 

The sarcasm missed Elihu entirely. “Sounds fine! Excepting the shave, of course. I’m hoping to find a volume of Herodotus I’m missing.”

 

“Which?” Buono asked.

 

“The one with the ants. I used to have—”

 

“Pardon me, learned physician,” Devin interrupted, “but friend Buono and I have already made a solemn plan as rowing-brothers to get horribly, stinking, self-soiling—”

 

“He has money,” Buono whispered in Devin’s ear. “His fees, remember?”

 

“Heroditis! Ants! Fascinating!” Devin gushed. “To the booksellers we go! But could we stop for a bite and a swallow first? To lubricate the intellect, mind you.”

 

Elihu shrugged. “I suppose I could eat something. Can you find us a place that keeps kashrut, Devin? A nice quiet place?”

 

Devin took Elihu by the arm and led him down a grimy alley. “This is Siracusa! I can find anything, given enough coin.”

 

Buono glanced back over his shoulder. The dock area disappeared out of sight as he followed around Devin around corners and between buildings. In minutes he had no idea which direction he faced or how far he had walked.

Chapter Four, Update Two

Friday, October 9th, 2009

 

“What is it, Master Achilles?” Buono asked without turning around.

 

“I want to know if you’re tired, landsman,” Achilles said in his ear.

 

“Of course I am. I’ve been tired for days. Everyone’s tired.”

 

“Did you all hear that?” Achilles’ screaming, hot breath burned the hairs in Buono’s ear. “Landsman says you’re tired! Are you tired?”

 

Heigh,” the rowers chorused. “No, Achilles!”

 

“Hear that? They’re not tired.”

 

“They lie,” Buono answered.

 

“Do you want a rest?” Achilles whispered.

 

“Is it up to me?”

 

“Ha! No.”

 

“Then I’ll not answer,” Buono grunted.

 

“But you do want one, don’t you landsman?”

 

“Achilles, when do you stop calling me that? I only want to know.”

 

“I like you,” Achilles said. “Really, I do.” He slapped the back of Buono’s head, cupping his huge hand to strike both sides of his skull at once. Buono pitched forward but managed to keep from smacking his forehead on the oar.

 

“That didn’t hurt you?” Achilles said.

 

“You sound concerned,” Buono replied. “But honestly, I can’t tell anymore.”

 

Achilles stepped out from between the rowing-benches. “Oars out! Drift! Ship oars! Rest.”

 

Men rushed past Buono to lower the sail. His arms and legs crunched together in stiff, trembling knots. His back and the muscles under his ribs burned and shivered.

 

He leaned back and looked up, taking in the huge square sheet of linen unfurling overhead. Cool wind brushed his cheek, and Buono frowned. Something was wrong.

 

The other rowers sprawled around Buono, chattering and laughing easily. Buono sat up straight and pounded his thighs lightly with his fists.

 

“What are you doing, then?” Devin asked him, laying flat on the bench.

 

“Just keeping my limbs from going stiff.”

 

“Oh, my poor boy,” Devin said. “Just let ‘em go. Achilles won’t murder you. Today. He always rests us for at least a couple hours. Might even call up some dinner.”

 

Buono hugged his arms together, rubbing both triceps. “A couple hours? Even if the wind blows the wrong way?”

 

Devin and Buono looked up together. High, straight clouds approached from the south. The sail, full with breeze from the north, began to roll and snap.

 

“Up! Up!” Achilles bellowed. “Oars in! Strike the sail! Before we’re taken aback–move, now!”

 

The wind slapped at Buono’s face and whistled in his ears. He picked up the oar and brought it to his chest. “Heigh!”

 

Devin groaned and pushed the oar. “I think my elbow’s gone a-missing, Buono. How did you know?”

 

Buono shrugged and his shoulders crackled. “Ho!” The crew pulled the sail up tight against the yard. “I’ve no earthly idea.”

Chapter Four, Update One

Monday, July 20th, 2009

CHAPTER FOUR

 

“Oars out!”

 

At Achilles’ command the rowers thrust their oars through the locks and over the water.

 

“To the water, reach!” The rowers stretched forward on their benches, towards the rear of the ship. Behind them, the oars snapped into the water.

 

“Stroke!” Achilles thundered. Buono and the other men leaned back in their benches and pulled the oars to their chests with a shout, “Heigh!” It took a few seconds to complete the stroke with their long oars.

 

“Lift it, Buono, lift!” his seatmate cried. All the oars but one rose dripping out of the water. The men reached forward with a “Ho!” Buono’s oar gnashed the water and skipped across the surface.

 

“Come on, catch up now!” he exhorted Buono. “Help me just a bit, would you?” Together, they wrestled the oar forward and plunged it into the water an instant after the others.

 

“Heigh!” Again Buono leaned into the stroke.

 

“You lift, then reach,” his seatmate said. “Christ, man, I thought you knew how to row!”

 

“It’s different,” Buono puffed, “when it’s just yourself in the boat and the oar weighs less than millstone.”

 

“You’ll learn the way of it. Ho! That was better. A bit early, but better. You’ve a fair pull.”

 

“Thank you. Heigh!”

 

“But you have to be efficient. You fight – Ho! – You fight it too much. You waste your energy. What’s worse, you waste mine. Heigh!”

 

“You mean, move it just when you do,” Buono said. “Ho!”

 

“Right. Pull as I pull, push as I – Heigh! – push, and never a wobble.”

 

“I’ll do my best. Sorry, what – Ho! – what did you say your name was? So many men at once, I couldn’t – Heigh!”

 

“Devin. From Brittany.”

 

“Ho! Thank you, Devin. You’ve been extremely kind to me. Heigh!”

 

“Have to be, don’t I? I have to share a bench with your landsman’s arse. Ho!”

 

The Sant’Agata churned through the water under oars at an easy cruise. At Paolo’s command the sailors hoisted the sail and lashed it to the yard.

 

“I hate to ask this, Devin,” Buono began. “Heigh!”

 

“Is it a stupid question? I love stupid questions.”

 

“Ho! Perhaps. How long do we row?”

 

“Until Achilles decides we need – Heigh! – a rest,” Guillame said. “Christ, that was a stupid one. Ho!”

 

“How did you fare against him?” Buono asked.

 

“Heigh! Broke my arm, the great dark bugger. Ho!”

 

“Really?”

 

“Said I hurried him. Was quite apologetic. Heigh!”

 

They rowed on without any conversation other than ‘Ho!’ and ‘Heigh!’. Buono lost track of the time. He was certain he had been rowing for hours. He looked up at the sun. It seemed to be at the same spot, just under the cross between mast and yard, it had been when he rowed the first stroke.

 

“Watch it, Buono, you’re slipping,” Devin said “Come on now, with the ‘heigh’ and the ‘ho’. I can’t barely hear you.”

 

“Trying,” Buono muttered.

 

“Try harder,” Devin said. “Heigh! And you’d best do it fast…”

 

“Well, I…”

 

“…because Achilles is staring right at you, my boy. Ho!”