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Chapter Four, Update Two

Friday, October 9th, 2009

 

“What is it, Master Achilles?” Buono asked without turning around.

 

“I want to know if you’re tired, landsman,” Achilles said in his ear.

 

“Of course I am. I’ve been tired for days. Everyone’s tired.”

 

“Did you all hear that?” Achilles’ screaming, hot breath burned the hairs in Buono’s ear. “Landsman says you’re tired! Are you tired?”

 

Heigh,” the rowers chorused. “No, Achilles!”

 

“Hear that? They’re not tired.”

 

“They lie,” Buono answered.

 

“Do you want a rest?” Achilles whispered.

 

“Is it up to me?”

 

“Ha! No.”

 

“Then I’ll not answer,” Buono grunted.

 

“But you do want one, don’t you landsman?”

 

“Achilles, when do you stop calling me that? I only want to know.”

 

“I like you,” Achilles said. “Really, I do.” He slapped the back of Buono’s head, cupping his huge hand to strike both sides of his skull at once. Buono pitched forward but managed to keep from smacking his forehead on the oar.

 

“That didn’t hurt you?” Achilles said.

 

“You sound concerned,” Buono replied. “But honestly, I can’t tell anymore.”

 

Achilles stepped out from between the rowing-benches. “Oars out! Drift! Ship oars! Rest.”

 

Men rushed past Buono to lower the sail. His arms and legs crunched together in stiff, trembling knots. His back and the muscles under his ribs burned and shivered.

 

He leaned back and looked up, taking in the huge square sheet of linen unfurling overhead. Cool wind brushed his cheek, and Buono frowned. Something was wrong.

 

The other rowers sprawled around Buono, chattering and laughing easily. Buono sat up straight and pounded his thighs lightly with his fists.

 

“What are you doing, then?” Devin asked him, laying flat on the bench.

 

“Just keeping my limbs from going stiff.”

 

“Oh, my poor boy,” Devin said. “Just let ‘em go. Achilles won’t murder you. Today. He always rests us for at least a couple hours. Might even call up some dinner.”

 

Buono hugged his arms together, rubbing both triceps. “A couple hours? Even if the wind blows the wrong way?”

 

Devin and Buono looked up together. High, straight clouds approached from the south. The sail, full with breeze from the north, began to roll and snap.

 

“Up! Up!” Achilles bellowed. “Oars in! Strike the sail! Before we’re taken aback–move, now!”

 

The wind slapped at Buono’s face and whistled in his ears. He picked up the oar and brought it to his chest. “Heigh!”

 

Devin groaned and pushed the oar. “I think my elbow’s gone a-missing, Buono. How did you know?”

 

Buono shrugged and his shoulders crackled. “Ho!” The crew pulled the sail up tight against the yard. “I’ve no earthly idea.”

Chapter Four, Update One

Monday, July 20th, 2009

CHAPTER FOUR

 

“Oars out!”

 

At Achilles’ command the rowers thrust their oars through the locks and over the water.

 

“To the water, reach!” The rowers stretched forward on their benches, towards the rear of the ship. Behind them, the oars snapped into the water.

 

“Stroke!” Achilles thundered. Buono and the other men leaned back in their benches and pulled the oars to their chests with a shout, “Heigh!” It took a few seconds to complete the stroke with their long oars.

 

“Lift it, Buono, lift!” his seatmate cried. All the oars but one rose dripping out of the water. The men reached forward with a “Ho!” Buono’s oar gnashed the water and skipped across the surface.

 

“Come on, catch up now!” he exhorted Buono. “Help me just a bit, would you?” Together, they wrestled the oar forward and plunged it into the water an instant after the others.

 

“Heigh!” Again Buono leaned into the stroke.

 

“You lift, then reach,” his seatmate said. “Christ, man, I thought you knew how to row!”

 

“It’s different,” Buono puffed, “when it’s just yourself in the boat and the oar weighs less than millstone.”

 

“You’ll learn the way of it. Ho! That was better. A bit early, but better. You’ve a fair pull.”

 

“Thank you. Heigh!”

 

“But you have to be efficient. You fight – Ho! – You fight it too much. You waste your energy. What’s worse, you waste mine. Heigh!”

 

“You mean, move it just when you do,” Buono said. “Ho!”

 

“Right. Pull as I pull, push as I – Heigh! – push, and never a wobble.”

 

“I’ll do my best. Sorry, what – Ho! – what did you say your name was? So many men at once, I couldn’t – Heigh!”

 

“Devin. From Brittany.”

 

“Ho! Thank you, Devin. You’ve been extremely kind to me. Heigh!”

 

“Have to be, don’t I? I have to share a bench with your landsman’s arse. Ho!”

 

The Sant’Agata churned through the water under oars at an easy cruise. At Paolo’s command the sailors hoisted the sail and lashed it to the yard.

 

“I hate to ask this, Devin,” Buono began. “Heigh!”

 

“Is it a stupid question? I love stupid questions.”

 

“Ho! Perhaps. How long do we row?”

 

“Until Achilles decides we need – Heigh! – a rest,” Guillame said. “Christ, that was a stupid one. Ho!”

 

“How did you fare against him?” Buono asked.

 

“Heigh! Broke my arm, the great dark bugger. Ho!”

 

“Really?”

 

“Said I hurried him. Was quite apologetic. Heigh!”

 

They rowed on without any conversation other than ‘Ho!’ and ‘Heigh!’. Buono lost track of the time. He was certain he had been rowing for hours. He looked up at the sun. It seemed to be at the same spot, just under the cross between mast and yard, it had been when he rowed the first stroke.

 

“Watch it, Buono, you’re slipping,” Devin said “Come on now, with the ‘heigh’ and the ‘ho’. I can’t barely hear you.”

 

“Trying,” Buono muttered.

 

“Try harder,” Devin said. “Heigh! And you’d best do it fast…”

 

“Well, I…”

 

“…because Achilles is staring right at you, my boy. Ho!”

 

 

Chapter Three, Update Four

Thursday, June 18th, 2009

Achilles lowered Buono to the deck. “You have my mercy. What did you say your name was?”

 

“It’s Buono.” He sat on the deck, afraid he’d fall if he tried to stand. He turned his head to Paolo. “Now what?”

 

Paolo laughed. “So eager! Rest. You’ve had a hard day, Buono. I’ll have the physician look at you. Tomorrow you row, unless this good north wind holds.”

 

“But– I failed.”

 

Achilles grinned down at Buono. “I like this one, Captain.” He offered his right hand and Buono took it. He let Achilles pull him to his feet.

 

“You mean, you think you had to beat him to join my crew?” Paolo said. “You? Ha! Just look at him! He’s magnificent! No. Achilles is my rowing-master and first mate. I keep an orderly ship. I don’t have time for every malcontent who wants to measure his cock. Every man in the crew has fought Achilles, and he’s beaten them all. Every man who gets the idea to challenge his authority already knows how it will turn out.”

 

“I think I could have known that without the lesson. But what if someone ever beats Achilles?” Buono asked.

 

“Well, I had another rowing-master before him,” Paolo said. “That one’s name was Hector.”

 

“You’re joking.”

 

“Perhaps I am.” Paolo turned to the assembled crew. “You lot! What are you staring at? We’ve fallen a point off the wind. Back to work!”

 

The crew dispersed, leaving Buono and Achilles alone on the fore-deck. Achilles still gripped Buono’s hand, steadying him.

 

“I think you made a mark on my neck, Buono.”

 

“I’m sorry.”

 

“Don’t be. It was a fair strike. I should have respected you more, kept my chin down.” Achilles paused. “There is a saying in my country: ‘Do not make a smaller man scared, for he will find a way to kill you.’ Are you scared of me, Buono?”

 

“Master Achilles, I am too hungry to be scared.”

 

“Ah, that explains it. We have another saying: ‘Always fight with your belly empty!’”

 

Achilles called for bread, and a sailor brought half a loaf to the foredeck. Just then the wind began to fail. The great white sail went limp as air spilled from it.

 

“Man the benches!” Achilleus shouted. The crew jumped to their positions and grasped the oars. Achilles barked the stroke and they rowed in unison.

 

“And you!” Achilles pointed to Buono, tearing at the bread with his teeth. Buono froze with a ragged hunk of it hanging from his mouth. “You, keep a watch off the bow. Sing out if you see any more rowboats!” Achilles laughed from his belly, a deep bass rumble. “Heigh! Ho! Heigh! Ho!” he called to the rowers. The galley churned on south, out of the Malamocco channel and into the Adriatic Sea.